Reviews of White Online
White Online
Alekzi
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exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 2 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen
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Started very strong, got boring very quick. It's actually very repetitive, outside of his class there are no innovations in this novel. It was well written at the beggining, but it get's boring, since we get MC that's always winning, he iddles, but is still the strongest, always clutch, etc. There is no tension in the novel, you know the outcome even before any action unravels. The fights are very repetitive, at first he was smart about how to approach fights, later on it changed to literally one-shotting enemies. I can recommend this book if you are looking for some fast-food adventure novel. If you are looking for a gem/something innovative then just know you won't find it here.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I've read about 53 chapters, and all I can say is that the story is fantastic. Alekzi has managed to write and describe a beautiful world, whether that would be the world of White Online or the real world. The Mc is simple yet complex in his own way, and the character interaction in both the game world and real life are extraordinary. The writing quality is good, but not perfect, but that is to be expected. I can still understand everything and have no problems picturing any of the breathtaking scenes. Overall, it's an incredible story that I can't stop reading, and I suggest that everyone reading this tries it out as well because it is more than phenomenal.
Honestly, I enjoyed the story a lot, everything was very nicely executed especially the Grammar, World development and all the maths needed in stats area, which is a basic flaw in many such novels, though there were some moments that gave 'gay' vibes but well, that's girly MC for you. But now that I have read some 200+ chapters, I felt something missing n that is that the MC is simply very nerfed, like I know that he's a intelligent n all but if we see his character, it's simply underpowered. Like, he has no OP skill like that heat vision, eye of (something), nullifying and copy skill, night vision, etc. He won the legacy tournament simply cuz' of the godly plot armour and bit of brain. So, I would like the author to give him at least some OP skills else it would be kinda unsatisfying.
