Grand_Void_Daoist
I am a big fan of your novel and do not give up. My wish is to see your novel complete, because I am really attached to it and to the MC and events. I even rejoice with the joy of the characters and grieve for their sadness. Indeed, I have never been attached to any such novel before .And I wish to you all the best. Sorry for my bad writing in English.
Review till chapter 1429. Fantastic storyline till now. Except for some minor plot holes, the story is consistent with great writing and a fenomenal mc. The cultivation levels are also understandable and is also explained in detail. If this keeps up, it will definetely become a great story as the story progresses. Already looking forward to an tournament arc if that is planned. Just fantastic, and hope more are deciding to read this story.
Even though there are some grievances that I have concerning the development of mc, This story is certainly above average in its own genre. cons in my opinion: the mc start out as a 15 year old teenager while having the mentality of a 9 year old. I have to mention that he improves tremendously as the story progress but my complaint is that why he has to start with -50 iq then to be improved to a normal mental capacity, 1000 chapters later. the antagonists are a mix and mash of old school arrogant type and some rare smart type which is a improvment in this genre. there are some spelling and grammatical problems specially in the latter half of the story which I don't mind but I suggest editing them. all allies are always shocked and impressed by the mc which is allright at the beginning but after 1000 chapters it becomes super annoying when we get 4 paragraphs of praise for the mc every other chapter.
Love the novel... Just startimg to feel a disconnect with the story because it doesn't match what the title and synopsis were about... Close to 1000 chapters in he hasn't been to another world... He has travelled to PLANES which are just detached lands of his world... Feel the story would have been better divided into two books... Maybe the first one would be titled "War for *****" or "*****'s Savior" or something... Walker of the Worlds would have been after he left his world... Or maybe it could have been named Void or Space Walker since thats more appropriate to his abilities... Makes me not focus on the novel sometimes and just wonder when he will be the walker of worlds we were promised....
started out very world developed with the world and character didnt seem out of the place but even tho I know the author said its slow paced i didnt expect this slow pace he was in the first realm for more than 400 chapter mann i like slow paced novel but now it just seem idiotic i dont maybe i will drop it for now and read or stumble upon in when it have more chapter... the pace story going i think I will read it a few years later coz totally not worth reading this slow paced novel with just 800 or so chapter
I was in a dilemma weather to give 5 stars beacuse of the awesome and amazing story plot or to give 1 star for thinning my patience time and time again with the very slow pace of the novel. Ultimately 5 star choice won and I will try to stay and endure the slow pace. But I still wanna request the Author to please speed up. Not much 20 to 50% will do.π€π€βοΈβοΈπππ
For a 'first novel', it's a really good one. The stability is a bit over the place but it's still better than most. Story development is going perfectly and things line up like (I presume) the author wants them to. Characters are awesome, I love Shrubby. World Background is great, the entire thing makes sense as well. Writing quality: 5 Stars. No grammar mistakes I noticed at all.
One of the better books on this site for sure. the MC actually has some substance to him and the world building is one of the best in this type of novel. And the plot extends beyond that of just offending the young master of a clan deafeating them and then repeat with a stronger clan/background. The only major issue I see is the grammar, more specifically tenses and work choice. The one that stands out the most is when the word more is used wrong such as when you said βmore fasterβ or other instances like this other than this great book.π
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