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Review Detail of Everythingonurmind in Walker Of The Worlds

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Everythingonurmind
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Even though there are some grievances that I have concerning the development of mc, This story is certainly above average in its own genre. cons in my opinion: the mc start out as a 15 year old teenager while having the mentality of a 9 year old. I have to mention that he improves tremendously as the story progress but my complaint is that why he has to start with -50 iq then to be improved to a normal mental capacity, 1000 chapters later. the antagonists are a mix and mash of old school arrogant type and some rare smart type which is a improvment in this genre. there are some spelling and grammatical problems specially in the latter half of the story which I don't mind but I suggest editing them. all allies are always shocked and impressed by the mc which is allright at the beginning but after 1000 chapters it becomes super annoying when we get 4 paragraphs of praise for the mc every other chapter.

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