Review Detail of The_Aegis in Walker Of The Worlds

For a 'first novel', it's a really good one. The stability is a bit over the place but it's still better than most. Story development is going perfectly and things line up like (I presume) the author wants them to. Characters are awesome, I love Shrubby. World Background is great, the entire thing makes sense as well. Writing quality: 5 Stars. No grammar mistakes I noticed at all.