Reviews of Utilizing a mafia boss

I admire your work very well, I read only the first chap and it makes me read further. I can't stop myself. How he is torturing him makes me shudder🥶🥶🥶

Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!

An interesting story for those who like to imagine beautiful love stories, although it is not my type of reading, I recommend reading it if you like love stories.

The scenes are well written, and I love the way how you described all the characters, Details, their feelings, and actions, Concept seems promising and You have built the world so real, Very astonishing book, and all the chapters are Interesting, the book is worth reading.

Your story looks promising you maintained your mafia setting and didn't soften it. The characters are well built, like the world around them. The only thing which needs a bit of polishing is your grammar, you make small mistakes, but you can use 'Grammarly' for that, Grammarly corrects your mistakes, I also use it. I hope this helps you have a good day :)

I'm sorry but I would review this book as a bias, I hate gore and brutality, but I, also want to write one but when I read this, I really can't . The mc seems to be merciless and I'm not fond of it so I'll also drop my review without bias. the story intro, punishing someone has already portrait the mc kind of character and it was a good way for me. Then What I just didn't like is that he's not the one who's doing it right away. He has pawns. The Mafia concept is pretty normal yet it is immersive since I don't like concept like this, this one is pretty interesting and good. The quality of writing and grammar is good but sometimes confusing maybe that's just me but that's how I see it, over all it was a good read but short so I can't say if it will be much better or worse so I'll wait for more.

Story is filled with some great mafia moments, in an industry that does not do Mafia novels at all. i recommend this to anyone looking for a gritty and brutal novel about the harsh realities of being a mafia boss.

Where are the new chapter? I heard they were coming soon. I see, they don't respect me huh? They dare to make me wait. I might as well...as well *sighs* just wait.

I haven't read anything mafia or gang themed in a while and I am loving it. I can't wait to follow this "family" on their journey. Can't wait to read more

What a story it was The author is great at writing things. I hope I can get more of this story. Thanks for everything. See you next time

The author strings together sentence perfectly. A compelling story and plot too. I actually want to see more of Lucifer(That's his nickname now lol).

I'm in love with the female lead, she seems interesting... The storyline is really arousing. Really want to see how the story goes, can't wait.

The story has potential, but the author need to improve in his writing, and the characters has good emotions and development.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

I really like the story so far! I'm new to the mafia genre and I feel like this was a pretty cool introductory to it. I'm very curious tho, to see how you will make the ML likable so because of that this story is getting added to my library.

okay okay am speechless I really love this book it's among my favorites can't wait to read more chapters keep the good work up author 👍♥️♥️♥️

What a promising start. The ML is quite ruthless. I am curious about how the FL will win his heart. Hope he becomes a lovable character. The story is amazing. Love a good Mafia love story. Keep up with the good work author.

looked on to your content...surprised that this one starts with a :: I was,I did,I saw :: May it be interesting for your readers,the way your writing it,and I liked the concept as I even have used this kinda in one of my Novellete,can't say more,it seemed nice as far as I am concerned with..

Well... the starting of the chapters was quite intriguing. Although the MC was a bit(?) merciless, but he have enough reason to do what he must done and that's what makes his characters likeable✨

the book has a good start. You can use Grammarly to edit and there were little typos also .The main character is quite superb and I enjoyed reading

well, this novel had a good start but it's like this was his first novel. So he made a few grammatical problems but you will get better over time I suggest you use the "Grammarly extension". Otherwise BEST OF LUCK!!!