Review Detail of iwo835 in Utilizing a mafia boss

Your story looks promising you maintained your mafia setting and didn't soften it. The characters are well built, like the world around them. The only thing which needs a bit of polishing is your grammar, you make small mistakes, but you can use 'Grammarly' for that, Grammarly corrects your mistakes, I also use it. I hope this helps you have a good day :)