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I'm sorry but I would review this book as a bias, I hate gore and brutality, but I, also want to write one but when I read this, I really can't . The mc seems to be merciless and I'm not fond of it so I'll also drop my review without bias. the story intro, punishing someone has already portrait the mc kind of character and it was a good way for me. Then What I just didn't like is that he's not the one who's doing it right away. He has pawns. The Mafia concept is pretty normal yet it is immersive since I don't like concept like this, this one is pretty interesting and good. The quality of writing and grammar is good but sometimes confusing maybe that's just me but that's how I see it, over all it was a good read but short so I can't say if it will be much better or worse so I'll wait for more.

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Utilizing a mafia boss

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thank you for your evaluation dear, I must say it's the first time someone genuinely...review it and It's not your fault, my writing need polishing and I'm trying to improve... but thank you so much for your time and efforts