Killerbee
Why? Why was this dropped?? It is really fun to read. It is an amazing novel, although I can't give five stars because there are some grammatical errors sometimes, but they can easily be overlooked since you can understand what the author tried to convey in the sentence. Even if it is not now, please continue this novel. Atleast give it an ending it deserves.
pardon me but there's seems to be a loop hope in the story, Firstly. When MC start his rebirth, he said clearly that his mother will die 5 year later with heart disease, and yet after reading 260 chapter with almost 2 years time span in the novel, the mother of this MC is well and kicking not even once in the story is mentioned that she is getting treated or removing the disease, i beg your pardon, please use notes when you wrote your plot with time span. Secondly. There is many extra in the novel that dont have any impact but the author just wrote it to make it more exciting. One such example is on 252 if i remember correctly which in the novel is stated that mc is doing fighting scene with a burky man. in the ending of the chapter it narated : "At this point, no one knows that because of seeing Ren's acting up close, the actor would try his hardest and 15 years later, he would become a bit celebrity. But that was a topic of another time." I dont fuuckin care about an extra story godd*mn Thank you
Just read Top Management. Most celebrity genre novel I find are just poor imitation of Top Management. tbh killerbee is so shameless not only to give this copy paste garbage 5 stars, but to go to premium as well? That's just way too low. Usually pirates copy stuff and sread it for free, but what he did is the opposite.
Well, atfirst I was reading this novel even though some part of story really felt unnecessary and there were few little problems. (I read till first 6 chapters) Then, I read some reviews about how you copied from Beautiful Top Star & Top Management.So,I decided to do some research. And then............. I am stunned.. π² I don't know what to say.... You directly copied the scenario from BTS and then to make word count or maybe to make it slight different -----you filled the scenario with useless details like... White Bear crying to Ren saying they can't stay together.... Oh and the so called old trope transmigration by track-kun. The difference between BTS & this story- the first one is a really beautiful original and the second is a token of copy-paste mastery , filled with useless unnecessary filler.
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.