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Shizuku_D_Geek
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pardon me but there's seems to be a loop hope in the story, Firstly. When MC start his rebirth, he said clearly that his mother will die 5 year later with heart disease, and yet after reading 260 chapter with almost 2 years time span in the novel, the mother of this MC is well and kicking not even once in the story is mentioned that she is getting treated or removing the disease, i beg your pardon, please use notes when you wrote your plot with time span. Secondly. There is many extra in the novel that dont have any impact but the author just wrote it to make it more exciting. One such example is on 252 if i remember correctly which in the novel is stated that mc is doing fighting scene with a burky man. in the ending of the chapter it narated : "At this point, no one knows that because of seeing Ren's acting up close, the actor would try his hardest and 15 years later, he would become a bit celebrity. But that was a topic of another time." I dont fuuckin care about an extra story godd*mn Thank you

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Shizuku_D_Geek
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Second !