Flower_Something
The novel revolves around a warzone so it's natural to expect serious atmosphere in many scenes. The writing does make you engaged to it's core as it tries to emphasis on the tense situation. Plus there's a lot of world building going around so for those who are loves to travel through different worlds, this book might be your interest.
I stumbled on this novel and decided to check it out. The first chapter gets you hooked and sets you straight on what's going on with the plot. I like the way the author describes the environment and characters in the novel. The only con is the grammatical errors that ruin the reading experience a bit.
The language in which the stories are being written is also very lucid. I am wishing more upcoming twist and turns. The character names are quite interesting. The story is slowly developing. The plot can be easily understood from the synopsis. I believe it's an unusual unfolding. Hoping for the best! Cheers to the writer, keep it up.
The plot and characters are very interesting and fleshed out but I find myself not able to understand the descriptions of the characters, theworld and timeline the novel is set in. And the first chapter had some problems with present and past tense usage while narrating. Anyway, I am six chapters in already and I can't wait to read more. Perhaps I would find out more about the world as I read further. Good job overall ☺️☺️
This is nicely done, the world building is a bit slow but that pales in comparison to the story. It keeps you interested with clever wording and interesting characters, only revealing enough of the plot to keep you intrigued. This is definitely something I’d continue reading in the future. Would 100% recomend!
It seems like there could be a gem here, but explaining could be more necessary. I'm mostly unaware of what most the characters even look like besides red hair or a muscular man. I mostly find myself asking: "What is this? What does this person look like?" and things of the like. Sometimes explanations are needed - I'm only commenting on the free chapters, maybe the author has improved later, but I was asked to look at what was available. It feels more like: "Person goes here, does this," rather than a deeper characters without fleshing out. This is just my personal opinion.