The plot and characters are very interesting and fleshed out but I find myself not able to understand the descriptions of the characters, theworld and timeline the novel is set in. And the first chapter had some problems with present and past tense usage while narrating. Anyway, I am six chapters in already and I can't wait to read more. Perhaps I would find out more about the world as I read further. Good job overall ☺️☺️
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