yu_chan_desu
Writing Quality (5/5): Little to none grammatical mistakes. Perfect descriptions if anything, balanced to the point that it's descriptive but not overbearingly tooooo much Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say Story Development (5/5): Really good balance for pacing! There's attention to detail, but at the same time, I don't feel that anything is being dragged on. Character Design (5/5): Honestly honestly honestly. For once we have a princess (well I guess technically not anymore?) that actually acts like she fits the role and isn't just some spoiled whining little brat. I actually want to root for her! World Background (5/5): I love the attention to world building! There's a lot packed in there, but it never feels like an info dump at all! Good luck! And I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
love the story the way it's started both were weak character and I am glad they both were going to be strong ,step by step not some cliche story where only ml lead is powerful, I am gonna so loving this story I literally wanted to read this kind of story finally someone made it I hope in the future we can see more fl character magic and all can't wait for the romance, their hate is so intense I can see their love will burn pages
This story had great potential and I am already invested after four chapters. Please more face-slapping scenes for the people who underestimated the princess! I love those scenes. The narration is witty (like the author) and the scenes are well written. It keeps the readers engaged. Good luck to author and I hope she wins in this WPC!
Words cannot describe how awesome this story is. The author describes every scene perfectly making us immerse in the experience of the story. If you want a strong FL you got her in our FL Princess Elys. Not only she is powerful, she is willing to suffer for her people. Awesome work author. I've become a fan.🥰
An interesting read so far, although I need more. I am intrigued with this strong-willed heroine and her fate in the hands of the vampires. The plot and the characters are very engaging that I could not drop the book until I reached the end. I can't wait to read more, so update please, dear yu chan. 😀✍️💖
The mc Elys is a fighter princess who lost a war and became a slave. She takes a series of decisions in order to survive, and all her steps bring her to marry the ml (last chapter for now). The book is well-written, the pace is just perfect: not too rushed nor slow. I'd like to know more about the ml, but his first appearance was rather interesting. He promises to be a good match for the princess :D
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Expected from a talented author, your book is good and your writing skills are impressive. I am hooked and will keep on reading the novel. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story blew me away. It had me on my toes and I loved every sec of it. The ML is a jerk and I love that the FL is able to stand her ground against him. I wanted to point out that the slap scene was hilarious and so satisfying. Author, keep up the good work! So sad I was only able to read the free chapters 😢.