Writing Quality (5/5): Little to none grammatical mistakes. Perfect descriptions if anything, balanced to the point that it's descriptive but not overbearingly tooooo much Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say Story Development (5/5): Really good balance for pacing! There's attention to detail, but at the same time, I don't feel that anything is being dragged on. Character Design (5/5): Honestly honestly honestly. For once we have a princess (well I guess technically not anymore?) that actually acts like she fits the role and isn't just some spoiled whining little brat. I actually want to root for her! World Background (5/5): I love the attention to world building! There's a lot packed in there, but it never feels like an info dump at all! Good luck! And I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
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