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More kingdom novels?! Not a cliche one though! If you love that rise to power and a protagonist who seems more human than paper, then dig in, this book is for you! I love galahad's personality and how things are turning out even though to story had probably just begun. Grammar is great, so not much to say here. Keep it up author! >3</
I like the beginning of the story. The redemption of a noble who does nothing but expunge on the gold and the lives of his fief and serfs is given a second chance, not through death, mind you, which almost all of the stories here are. This then is his chance to redeem the loss of his fief, his new serfs could even help him in the rebuilding. Thanks you!
Agreed with previous reviews, has potential to be a great kingdom building story even without sytem menus it can be done other authors take note. Things I like: a living breathing human mc with vulnerabilities and faults. A very realistic view on nobility and marriage. Not many tired cliches. Humor is there, and I love the father in law he's a ballbreaker! Things I don't like: Some of the wording in regards to titles also how some words aren't quite right as they are used. I think all authors on this site would benefit greatly from a spell check being integrated into inkstone.
Damn I feel bad for the mc. He got so much sh!t in so few chapters.. But I know that it will make it all the sweeter when he finally activates his plot armor and starts destroying anything and everything that ever opposed him. So just write more and satisfy my desire for a comeback Mr/Ms author. Srsly write more.
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