Review Detail of SouthToiletWizard in The Rise of a Noble

Agreed with previous reviews, has potential to be a great kingdom building story even without sytem menus it can be done other authors take note. Things I like: a living breathing human mc with vulnerabilities and faults. A very realistic view on nobility and marriage. Not many tired cliches. Humor is there, and I love the father in law he's a ballbreaker! Things I don't like: Some of the wording in regards to titles also how some words aren't quite right as they are used. I think all authors on this site would benefit greatly from a spell check being integrated into inkstone.