The story could have been good if the writer had an editor. Or at least had the beginning of the story edited. Reason behind is that if you want to gain more readers, edit the beginning. Not the middle or the subsequent chapters released.

Welcome back Author!

He’s probably gonna die someday in this fic.

Hmmm...a lot of dead Peters here. Seems to me the author has a destined rivalry with a Peter in his world.

This chapter is so cringey. But, I guess Disney would love this. I mean, the story now has two princesses.

Same story with Era of Castles and the 99 Dragon Eggs.

Hmmm...I’m beginning to think that this book is probably a good one, but I can’t say. I don’t know. Maybe I’ll wait?

YAAAAYYYY!!! The thought that the author is back gives me hope in this pandemic.