Deathilim_609
This story is a unique uptake of the genre of transmigration into a novel! Imagine becoming the teacher of the MC, I was excited when I saw this novel for the first time. Writing Quality is pretty much solid with hardly any mistakes. Updating schedule is very stable and the world-building is interesting. Somewhat like bread and butter, perfectly crafted. I love this novel, please don't drop author! Good job!
First of all, the book itself is a unique and difficult concept that writers can venture upon. However, author-san made it interesting with the hype and suspense. Character-Wise, I see no problem and each has their personality fairly justified and seen in real life. World-Building might need a bit of work although the majority is understood. For example, in the early chapters, I'm still confused as to the settings of the world, is it a magical world with floating islands, etc. The writing Quality is well, the novel just needs a bit of proofreading as some words are either not supposed to be there or spelt wrongly. Sentence structure might be an issue, some parts, IMO, sound weird. However, overall it is a great novel and I love to see where this story goes. Good Job
The story is interesting and enjoyable. The way the characters are portrayed makes it easier to understand them, especially their feelings and the line of thoughts. Although the story seems a little fast paced at the start it is still good. Writing quality is pretty good too. The choice of words to describe things makes the story more enjoyable. Overall 4.8
The wide range of vocabulary is crazy! The author is capable of using many different words to describe a variety of events in the book. The story itself is interesting and I recommend everyone to try reading it. Although I think that the author should try using quotation marks when a character is thinking of something. I think that'll make the story more grammatically correct.
I would recommend this book. At the moment there are only about 20 chapters released. I find the premise of the novel to be noteworthy. The overall plot is interesting. The release of updates so far has been consistent and at a reasonable schedule. The grammar is decent. Although there are minor grammar mistakes there is nothing major. Since there's only 20 chapters there hasn't been much character development and world building so far. I'm looking forward to see how the author will add to the characters personalities and develop them throughout the novel. The only reason I gave a 4/5 review is because the novel has a lack of chapters so there's a lot of room for it to grow.
Story is going great so far some typos and grammar errors here and there, so far good character design and background, the world background is explained somewhat enough (as of chapter 9) the story has fast and slow pacing with some time skips, all in all good enough, but it can be better! 8.2/10 recommended read
Before I began my journey to read this masterpiece, the summary alone is already intriguing enough. Plus the Author's note about how he wouldn't write any romance scene!!! I love you already Author! I wish all Authors are like you that only focuses on its action and adventure plot. no romance or harem involved.
So here we go another transmigration story but it's also quiet different since MC seem to have his own secrets that is slowly being revealed. The character design is not too detail but it's fine as long as the character continue to develop more. I prefer if the MC remain in the backline, helping from the Shadows without many people knowing instead of being famous on the frontline. I don't mind about the irregular update as long as author continue writing good Chapters and rushing the plot. Overall this is a good novel to read 👍🏻💖