Review Detail of S_Takeshi in The Novel's Professor

First of all, the book itself is a unique and difficult concept that writers can venture upon. However, author-san made it interesting with the hype and suspense. Character-Wise, I see no problem and each has their personality fairly justified and seen in real life. World-Building might need a bit of work although the majority is understood. For example, in the early chapters, I'm still confused as to the settings of the world, is it a magical world with floating islands, etc. The writing Quality is well, the novel just needs a bit of proofreading as some words are either not supposed to be there or spelt wrongly. Sentence structure might be an issue, some parts, IMO, sound weird. However, overall it is a great novel and I love to see where this story goes. Good Job