Story is going great so far some typos and grammar errors here and there, so far good character design and background, the world background is explained somewhat enough (as of chapter 9) the story has fast and slow pacing with some time skips, all in all good enough, but it can be better! 8.2/10 recommended read
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LIKEDeathilim_609:Hello, since you're an active reader. Can I have your thoughts about Samantha as a character? she will probably have a lot of depth later since il make her a ‘romantic’(dont hope) sub plot.