Reviews of The ML and his Villianess.

Very good story I would for sure recommend to anyone BUT to me is missing the PoV of the ML I am only saying this based on my own thoughts, Why ? Well to start so far I have no idea who Liam really is, apart from the interaction of him with Eve when they meet and talk, when he first met her what was his thoughts at that time, had he already met Rose as well Eve said that he had but she could be wrong no 🤔, is Liam and Rose friends, when did he discovered his feelings for Eve when they first met, when they was chating online or When they kissed i wanted to know his side of story, and why Rose went to his apartment what happened when she was there, did he and her had some sort of relationship in the past, I have many questions about Liam’s life, This why the Pov of Liam Is important so that we can have a connection with him when reading his thoughts and decisions. Even saying all this the story is very good hope u all will try.

Eve does her beSt to get out the Story plot and Liam pretty much is in love with Her. ends toGethEr and have a kid. what kind of confusing iS to many things are happening. more people from her other world is transferring to the novel world. to many hIdden Schemes or plots working at the same time. 🥱 kind of lost my interest but love StoRy is ok. It’s not bad story, has some rare laughs.

One of these days, I'm writing a story where the ML dies because I am tired of reading teenage romances. Cap lock is tiring. This novel is ok.

story jumps around a lot. Where is the story break or something to indicate a scene switch? the FM's personality turned me off as well, but that may just be me.

This was nice. Endearingly kind of nice. Although you shook the hell out of me at the first chapter. But when it progresses, I find it alluringly kind of cool. And here I am dropping my review here before continue reading the story as it caught my interest! Really! Great job author! Keep up the good work!

looks good. i wanted to add this story to my library but couldn't find the option. yeah. it does feel weird to find yourself one of the characters of a book. let me see if this story goes as i feel it will go.

Love this story , I like the way it started , keep your work going . I have put the story in my library . I would be great to read more. Thank you .

For the most part I like it. It does need to explain how she knows all this stuff earlier on. The bad thing is when I got to chapter 41 the plot had jumped to after she was married and might have had a child.

the story has no direction and has alot of gaps as mentioned in other comments. it could have been a great story if only it was developed properly

Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️

Great great great book great writing style . I reallyreallyreally love it but the story goes too fast and at first there is almost zero time to think before the whole plot jumps to marraige and love and kids

This story has a good plot. It is a good story. However the language level and writing style is truly not good. Mostly the flow of the story is absolutely no smooth or fluid and there are a lot of plot holes. More so the explicit scene are too.... They should be censored or lowered by 70%. But I think this novel could be a real gem. Keep it up.