Cyclxne
The plot is interesting. So far there are three chapters, so deciding on whether the story's development would be hard. The characters are pleasant and well described. The author seems to have ta unique writing style. With the use of uncommon descriptive words, the author was able to grab my attention. I have no complaints when it comes to the world background and stability of updates. Keep up the good work author!!!
started reading, I won't comment on style/quality of the writing or content. however the chapters are up to 628 and it just...stops. no ending no info, only a comment from the author that they might get motivated to write again if their other novel does well. yet the novel is marked as completed. I wish I looked sooner to see that it was never finished.
Really good story. Itโs not necessarily the best story i have ever read but it is quite a fun read nonethless. I like harems so that is not a con for me but it might be if you dislike them. My one big problem is just that i wish the MC would actually start a relationship with one of them. I am only on like chapter 80 though so hopefully he starts a relationship soon. The MC power is really cool and many parts of this story have gotten me really hyped Up. Overall a good story so far and i reccomend it.
I'm in chapter 4-5 but still don't know the leading character's appearance. Author please use characterization after so that we can know what does the characters look like. From what I read you just introduce family background relationship with the MC and that's it. I don't if it you will put the character appearance and background in the later chapter. Anyway the book is good.