I'm just a living teenager trying to figure out what to do with my life. There are so many options to choose from and I hope I choose the right one.
First of all the synopsis was good. Short yet intriguing. The characters are well defined but not too described. The entire plot is magnificent. I love how in the action scene you used the right adverbs and words thus not making it cringy.
Jason and Jennifer. Siblings with names that start with J
He loved a good chase. That's the phrase I love
Thanks for pointing that out.
You're right. I'll correct it. Thanks
The title of your novel 'witch of the throne' stands out. One of the things I like about your novel is the little humour added here and there in parts of the book. I see no problem in the novel based on the chapters I've read but i think the prologue needs to be worked on. Nice read. I recommend this.
Honestly, I don't know where you got this idea from. I have never seen anything like this before. If someone had pitched this to me I would have laughed but you are pulling it off. Your synopsis is nice, especially this line "It's grievous when you are being banned from your home just because of seeing the face of who created you". Nice fantasy book. This is a nice read.
"A life to play, a story to fight for, and a game that will never be over." Putting that quote on the cover was a good choice. I must commend your writing style it's unique. This novel is a good read. I suggest you revise the book to make it better though. Nice book though.
I am giving this book 5 stars because there is nothing that I have found wrong about this book. For starters, the book cover is everything, though it's simple it draws you to the book. In my own opinion, this book and its storyline are worth reading.
This makes me want to read more
Not by nature? Eh, so we talking good witch?