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Too much info dump For example When buying things in shop There will be a info dump like how it is compared to others, blah blah blah When fighting and in a middle of a fight The author will explain a 5 secs fight into a whole chapter. I like the story but you keep putting unnecessary info . Stuck at chapter 120
Its good if you reach the chapter when he got his power other than that you must have a lot of patience The first 7 chapter are most frustrating chapter i have read in my life. The mc got ridiculed for his entire existence. The mc's parents died His fiancé want to break their marriage contract His relatives are so disgusted about him so they cut him off He is weak because his chaos magic is still asleep. The grammar and the world building is good