crazy_immortal
very dissapoining for a revenge novel MC only thinks with his dick prefers a low level girl or woman with a hole than a strong high level intelligent person as a subordinate so disappointing as long as its female he waste precious subordinate and slave seal on them instead of looking for intelligent and resourceful people as subordinate
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I've really liked reading this story so far. the premise of returner is combined with system, and the trope of everyone has a system. I'm worried the author wont be able to make the characters actions effect the larger world, because he is a 1000 year old near immortal ranked cultivator who's gone back in time.
the first few chapters where ok, but then the whole thing becomes just too clichΓ©, contradicting and boring. The MC just changes too abrutly and even becomes just as bad as the people he wants to take revenge on. Even worse, he is supposed yo hace loved cor 1k years and his actions are somewhat dumb, I ver that being 18 can cause dime problems, but that would just be somewhat of a newsance. The world building is also badly done and I ended up skipping many parts. The parts that I cringed the most is how visible the author either has no idea how romance works or is a big douche.
trash mctrash plotpathetic retard mc weak fk mcntrcuckolded mcmc has his lover r#ped .his brother's ntr him.mc thinking with his dongmc doesn't prepare for apocalypsemc previous life was the most retarded.his wives were r#ped by his so called brothers/friends, they kept telling him but he didn't believe them.truly a retard sh#tty fktard cuckolded mc
Well I just want to know about his past girls. who they were and how many there were. When his brother fuc*ked all his wives did they told him about it or not. What I really want to know is was he just the highest retard in the whole existence who didn't believe when all his wives told him they were raped by his brother or the girls were just sluts who didn't tell him and enjoyed the *** with his brother.
The novels quite nice actually. Writing quality is quite good with a few word misses due to automatic grammar correction programs. One thing I'm slightly bothered by is that we haven't had any potential romantic partners(the ones that are actually spent time to cultivate love). Currently every girl that the mc spent more than a couple hours with had either been f*cked, tortured or played with. Basically this is a erotic novel that also has a cultivation story. Its a good time to read and it has been taking 10 minutes off my day every day for the last 2 months.
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