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franchox
franchoxLv43yrfranchox

the first few chapters where ok, but then the whole thing becomes just too cliché, contradicting and boring. The MC just changes too abrutly and even becomes just as bad as the people he wants to take revenge on. Even worse, he is supposed yo hace loved cor 1k years and his actions are somewhat dumb, I ver that being 18 can cause dime problems, but that would just be somewhat of a newsance. The world building is also badly done and I ended up skipping many parts. The parts that I cringed the most is how visible the author either has no idea how romance works or is a big douche.

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Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv5Kotik_Kotik

the first few chapters where ok? did you read the same book as i or does the author actually achieve the miracle of making this book even worse after the first few chapters thus making the first few look good in comparison?