what are you even doing here?
"if i did i would have contacted you to ask for some tips and tricks"
"near the top spot" nr1 IS the top spot
last sentence of the previous paragraph and first sentence of this paragraph are highly redundant
distort -->distorted shroud -->shrouded
well that's convenient
how would you ever make this assessment without any knowledge of the mobs health or other defensive stats
a hundred million players in the same cuty at the start
suspense of disbelief time... noway they'd willingly give up on the free money they make from forced labor. reminder slavery is explicit legal in the US for prisoners
ngl the thought of a physical fighter bard bores me beyond words
i dont mind the name drop but i hate him yelling it. having it as inner monologue is good but this is not it chief
please tell me he wont be yelling his skill names for the entirety of the book because i don't think i can handle that