Reviews of The Last Child of Darkness: The Winter Night

Good. Please update more. And when will he meet his mom?Good. Please update more. And when will he meet his mom?Good. Please update more. And when will he meet his mom?Good. Please update more. And when will he meet his mom?

Really good chapter and really good story. Please update more.Really good chapter and really good story. Please update more.Really good chapter and really good story. Please update more.Really good chapter and really good story. Please update more.

I am a big Percy Jackson fan, and I have to say that the self insert flowed perfectly. Bravo Author-san, bravo. The one thing I felt didn’t fulfill me about the original Percy Jackson series is that, while it had comedy, it did not have enough. Your character’s personality, and the background flow into the world and lighten things up, a lot. I’m a huge comedy fan, and this is, dare I say it, an improvement from the original series which didn’t have nearly enough comedy for my tastes. Anyways, I’m just giving this review to praise this story and the one who wrote it. Thank you for this, and please don’t drop it! All 10 books!

This is a great Percy Jackson fanfic. To be honest Is actually the first one I ever read, but I liked it alot.........No grammar errors, no boring stuff, MC is not an Idiot and more that you will find out once you read it....Bye~

There is not enough Percy Jackson fanfics on this website. However, from the ones I have read - yours is easily one of the best. The only thing that I find kinda disappointing is the use of his powers and his strength. Like as the son of Nyx, he should probably make use of his umbrakinesis ( dark ness powers ).

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Writing Quality: It's pretty decent. No typos, no grammar issues. Probably. I don't remember any glaring ones. 5 stars. Stability of Updates: Sometimes this author updates daily, sometimes he goes 10s of days without updating, as far as I can tell. Pretty sporadic. But I guess there aren't months between single chapters. I want to give it a 3 star, but I also want to give the author a higher rating. 4 stars. Story Development: The first few chapters, it seems like it's gonna be a rehash of Percy Jackson with a OP observer protagonist. Ew. However, after the first few chapters, that gets better. I was going to rate it 3 stars at first, but now since I like where it's going, 5 stars. Character Design: The description of the protagonist itself is edgy. Everything from his appearance to his backstory is edgy. He's also OP. Oh well, at least his personality isn't like, a self-pitying retard. You know those types. Overall, I think the protagonist is pretty decent. The author was also pretty good at writing Percy and Annabeth in, they weren't complete side characters. World Background: Percy Jackson. It's literally all the events of Percy Jackson. Aunty Em's Emporium was there, Echidna and the St Louis Arch, Ares and the Tunnel of Love... but it's pretty tastefully done. They don't all have the exact same resolutions, the dialogue for sure isn't the same. I like it. I really like it. 5 stars.

I Like Your Novel And I hope You Will Update Every day. So please Don't Dropped This Novel.

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I IN LOVE WITH THIS NOVEL! PLEASE DON'T DROP! PLEASE DON'T DROP! PLEASE DON'T DROP! PLEASE DON'T DROP! PLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP!VPLEASE DON'T DROP! PLEASE DON'T DROP!VPLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP! VPLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP!PLEASE DON'T DROP!VV PLEASE DON'T DROP!VPLEASE DON'T DROP!

A perfuc 5 from me because ive read his past works and expect great thing from this. I've read all if chronicles of arth and it's reboot, amd the other one that he started in between about being a sword god/deity or some thing. Sorry forgot the name, that's not the point mr. Cross is a verry talented writer and can genuinely write entertaining and interesting storys and characters. Im verry exited to see where this goes

I like your novel so if you do write this.. I have a feeling itll not be bad ........ ....O.. .../||\ .../..\ //////// \\\\\\ ABCDEFJMNLOPQRSTWZXY

As I cannot keep my promise, here’s 5 stars and i’ll supply power stones for 1 month. Also to fill up the characters limit i’m gonna idk Damn the Pikachu that pings everyone when the power stone ranking gets near to top 10 then bugs Ark to start writing even more chapters and I don’t even know where this is going now since I can’t think so i’m gonna stop here now if possible and yeah i really don’t know what else to say oh yeah sorry not sorry about the punctuation i’m not gonna add them

I expect a lot from this novel Good luck, with all the chapters !!!!, konosuba is one of my favorite novels, when I saw that cross is going to make a fan of konosuba, I can only hope for the best

I love it so far so please keep it up I will be sad if I do not get anymore chapters. I'm just going to keep rambling because I need 140 words so you don't really need to read this. I love that you are such a humble author. I think it is funny that the personalities of Irene and Ark contradict eachother.