Reviews of The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

It was a good story. Please update more of it.. can't wait..The character was sensible and the background was good. Can't wait for the character development..

Harem? No problem? Dark humor? Present! Never really read a harem novel with quite a depressing setting, so I have good hopes for the book. Imma just update my review

The story kinda makes me uncomfortable (what can I say, I've a weak heart :D) so I'm just focusing on the presentation. The writing style is confident A little wordy sometimes: "Chap 2: ...sat on a desk at the edge of it" -> "sat on a desk." Seriously how do you sit on the table edge? Is the table turned sideways? Jk Jk... You are right to have split the chapter into smaller sections. If the chapter is too long, readers tend to forget what they read at the beginning. Also have you tried dividing the into "scenes" with a header on top and a divider between scenes like ~.~.~.~? I find it suitable for the genre you're aiming for. Anyway, good luck with the rewrite!

I dropped it previous time due to excessive fillers and well to let the chapters accumulate, but i forgot about it later. Now that its back, i'm just very happy. The story is different and has a unique vibe to it.............................................

So, you may think that this novel is entirely just... nsfw, but you’d be wrong. Sure, there are some nsfw parts, but I think the plot is actually better than the “plot”. Sure, there are plenty of plot holes, but I’m kinda looking forward to seeing if the MC becomes more and more human or descends into depravity. And sure, it is VERY edgy, but somehow isn’t that cringey to read. To the author, if you read this: so far, I am enjoying the story. I would deduct stars for the nsfw but unlike SOME PEOPLE (as you can tell, this is not directed to you), I don’t give low rating because I don’t like a genre. Rating an nsfw low for nsfw or a harem low for harem is like rating a comedy low for not being serious... *ahem* anyhow, ACTUAL TO THE AUTHOR: I like your work, keep it up! And also... this is just my personal preference, you don’t have to (and shouldn’t, if you prefer not to) listen to it, but I feel like I prefer more focus on the MC getting power and finding himself than the *ahem* scenes. But yeah, I’ll be looking forward to seeing what path our MC is going down! (^-^)

As a reader, I love the dark and twisted reads. I can’t get enough of the ones that make my heart race and keep me on the edge of my seat. It is most certainly one of my genres of choice. More often than not, webnovels labeled as a 'dark story' are mostly just smut novels in disguised with bdsm or yandare onaholes. But wow, I totally love this book! It's well thought out character with solid backstories development, psycological explanation on why the mc decided such and such. Had me utterly addicted. Although I do find it odd how the mc seems to just be wasting his time currently and had made no effort in abusing his system to power himself up.

Hidden diamond in pile of coal. This is a very interesting novel with a lot of issues answered about the relationship. It could help a lot of people to understand the reason about there broken relationships lol. The facts mentioned in the story is almost true from a psychological point of view. So i will recommend every male to at least read the story onces especially the latter part of the story. Its a eye opener.

Very good story with a Unique plot. Not Copier like other original novels. Would have liked if there were more updates like every day but i understand that you need time. Good novel overall though.

Really interesting concept with a unique cultivation system. Plus it has fan service, realistic action and some thought provoking dialogue. I’m really looking forward to where the story goes.

Some time ago I wrote a review about this story and in short I said: "good story but not my thing because everything is too verbose". Now the story has been rewritten and I just don't like it any more. The protagonist is just a psycho and the story was kind of ok until the "boy meets girl" situation started. Then it goes on and on about boring stuff I don't care about. The writing is good, but the story is just of so low interest, I scrolled down and scrolled and scrolled and hoped something would happen but they talked and talked and then I thought: "I don't care any longer". I can't rewrite the other review, no idea why, but I can create a new one. This story is no longer something I recommend people who'd love a different story, this seems to be (you can correct me, but I don't care) harem building by a psycho. So, no, I don't like this any longer. The chapters where the author's experience is told make my dislike even larger. This is much better than anything I can create, but I still say: "skip this, don't waste your time!". Sorry.

Top notch novel. The writing quality is excellent to which how the author structure it can put you in a reading mood. And as you go into the reading mode, the story can be a bit dark but the way how the MC is like that and why this is his attitude is explained really well. You really gotta understand the story to know why the MC is like that. Character development is good so far. I recommend you users out there to read this if you're a fan of cultivation, clever and smart protagonist, mature content and especially Hypnosis. Btw, if you're thinking the MC is a dead brain power hungry and lustful protagonist, some of it is true but in a more interesting way not like "im gonna use hypnosis for ***". To know why, go read the this beautiful novel!

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ..................................................................................😎

Reveal spoiler

Today im here because the other readers had failed me Why the hell has not a single reader mentioned the cover which is a silver watch and not what auhtor called a golden watch, SCAM, Im telling u it’s a scan so im inviting everybody here to boycott the author. Justice will be given one day Author u can hide from me but u can’t escape the heavens !

It is a mess. I got up to chapter 17 and I really regret it. I hope that someone out there learns from my mistake and avoids this hot mess of confusion, rapey wish fulfillment and hypocritical bull crap. My soul died a little.

good, I like it(Not in the mood to make a long review so imma just keep typing in these parentheses for a while till it lets me post)(that wasn't enough I guess soooooooooooooo lets hope that does it)

I kind like the MC, even though he's a bit of psychopath but deep down he does care. I was bored with cultivation novel and this is a breath of fresh air for me.

Hello ! From my point of view, it is really good story. Each char has their story ,and the system is pretty good compared to some others. I hope this story will continue ! Thank you !

I strongly admire this story. It hits all the rights dots to make something better. The only bad part is that there aren't enough chapters. If it could update more frequently then great but if not I'll treat it as a rare treat like shinobi the rpg.

Reason im not giving it a straight up 5 stars . Is only because it has only been 7 chapters. I like the story so far if you like harem stories and dont have any qualms with hypnosis and enjoy some good revenge served with cold beer . (Which i bet will come). Then i think you will like it too. The MC is abit psycho but it seems like so far that he treats and will treat his people with love and care which def is a + for me. but NB if you are like me and you basically see yourself as the mc , then you probably wont like the 2-3 first chapters .