Review Detail of Quiescent_Rumble in The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

Some time ago I wrote a review about this story and in short I said: "good story but not my thing because everything is too verbose". Now the story has been rewritten and I just don't like it any more. The protagonist is just a psycho and the story was kind of ok until the "boy meets girl" situation started. Then it goes on and on about boring stuff I don't care about. The writing is good, but the story is just of so low interest, I scrolled down and scrolled and scrolled and hoped something would happen but they talked and talked and then I thought: "I don't care any longer". I can't rewrite the other review, no idea why, but I can create a new one. This story is no longer something I recommend people who'd love a different story, this seems to be (you can correct me, but I don't care) harem building by a psycho. So, no, I don't like this any longer. The chapters where the author's experience is told make my dislike even larger. This is much better than anything I can create, but I still say: "skip this, don't waste your time!". Sorry.