Drei05
Great story honestly, it has no plot holes so far and everything is actually quite smooth to read, all characters feel real and so does the system, story has a good gradual progression quite a good story, sadly not a story for me as I don't like MC's using guns (I also didn't read a novel's extra because of this) and when the MC tries to babysit the original novel protagonist (Not sure if he did it but he mentioned maybe doing it) Over all an amazing novel, reccomend for all
This is really good! Especially the comedy was great lol Imagine a System who actually shows some sense and can do dank memes. The Transmigration Plot is really like the Author's POV as well, so readers of it are welcomed. Well, the only issue is the English in the beginning chapter, but it's not too bad and can be read through with ease. So, my opinion is very positive, I liked it. All of you should give it a try as well.
cons:- some higer being creating universe with just snap of finger............................ system having his own will and cursing mc and mc whining................... higer being making m=our mc suffer for entertainment.................. mc being over kind who feel guilty for every single thing that is not his fault (may be he should adapt to this world quickly)...... pros:- story is good , world building is good , characters are okey
It's good. most of the (extra) type novel mc Doesn't have background but in this novel like real extra type mc nor have high backer or nor have weak backer. More like medium backer that's good. And the story is also good. It's flow smoothly and the Foundation is also good. Overall I like it.But please reales it soon possible if you can.
Amazing novel. I really like the relationship between the System/Sariel and Raven. It is also interesting to see his progress and to see him catching up to Alec. Another aspect I like is his unidentified power, which we do not know about, because the Higher Beings want him to find out about these himself. There is also Ravens personality which I really like and how he and his family have the motto "Be neutral. Be good to those who are good, and be evil to those who are evil." To conclude, I really like you novel and I hope you are going to continue writing.
It starts well, but then the harem kicks in. Everything went downhill after that. Mc started to act cringey and flirty. His teacher came and kiss him on the cheek in front of everyone in the class and Mc did some cringey stuff too. I tried to put up with it a couple chapters more, but the cringey stuff was always the same, so I dropped it.
until chapter 50 the novel was really good but from 50 onwards it became a little boring and after 80 chaps the writing quality went really bad,bro I suggest take a rest for sometime cause the novel is really good but these 30 40 latest chaps are quite boring and look to forced and the main thing is mc isn't growing at all plz make it so atleast grows faster most people like it that way