Fairnak
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Despite a few grammer issues (and I mean few). This novel is and enjoyable read. The MC actually has a personality which is more than most novels on this app. There is also a good balance between action and calm. Good pacing as well and proper level increases. The MC also feels as if they worked for most of their power rather than achieving it for no good reason.
TL:DR Wait for about 100 chapters to be released and hope the issues are addressed. I just started the book, but this is my thoughts as of the first 40 chapters. First the concept is interesting. Aside from that is is average in most other aspects. There are a few issues that cannot be ignored in my opinion. First, there is no apparent reason for the system. The Mc already appears to be smart enough as is, and all his choices are the correct choices by the systems standards. Second, there is no reason for him to be a transmigrator. Despite the many references to our world to contrast with this new world, there often seems to be no reason for these comparisons. We also know nothing of the mc's life before the transmigrated. While that isn't necessarily a negative it often just appears to be a simple filler content. It appears as if the author is parodying Versitial Mage/Quan Zhi Fah Shi, in how they treat transmigration. My final gripe is the poor pacing especially after he returns from the month long training, the entire time I could barely tell if days were passing or weeks (not actually, but it sometimes made me read the same passage more than once). This in consistent pacing is a issue throughout the story, but gets worse as the story progresses. Still I do think this story has some potential. I would wait till the story has about 100 chapters to see if it's worth a read.
Almost feel bad for the novel creator, how the novel is the top of vote but novel isn't coming out. Basically a daily grind thing to people now...
true but he isn't being watched as far as we know, and there was no word showing that he was expressing that or if it was internal. But if we go with what you suggest (and what i think to be the case as well) it would be an interesting technique to allow us to experience his manipulation first hand.
meow? ahh yes the cow goes meow
understandable, I was just curious. So when someone uses a fast pass or coins, are you able to exchange them for money. Just curious and I understand if you can't tell me or don't want to. Guess I have to wait until I get a new job to read more of your book.
great chapter
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