Review Detail of UnholyBug in The Extra's Dominance

Item: The Extra's Dominance
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

UnholyBugLv31yrUnholyBug

Great story honestly, it has no plot holes so far and everything is actually quite smooth to read, all characters feel real and so does the system, story has a good gradual progression quite a good story, sadly not a story for me as I don't like MC's using guns (I also didn't read a novel's extra because of this) and when the MC tries to babysit the original novel protagonist (Not sure if he did it but he mentioned maybe doing it) Over all an amazing novel, reccomend for all

The Extra's Dominance

Drei05

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Drei05AuthorDrei05

a bit spoiler but... . . . . . . . . . Raven wouldn't just use a gun... Also Raven's intention wasn't to help or baby sit the main characters, it's to fix what he did, like the discrimination stuff. So Raven is doing it for self satisfaction.

1yr

Drei05AuthorDrei05

Thanks for reading my novel and leaving a review, I really appreciate your support so I hope you will still do in the future :3

1yr

UnholyBugLv3UnholyBug

Just spoil me a bit but will he eventually use a weapon other than a gun?

Drei05:a bit spoiler but... . . . . . . . . . Raven wouldn't just use a gun... Also Raven's intention wasn't to help or baby sit the main characters, it's to fix what he did, like the discrimination stuff. So Raven is doing it for self satisfaction.

1yr

Drei05AuthorDrei05

Okay so, Raven uses gun and dagger in the early chaps... . . . . But then he switched to sword and gun :3

Drei05:Thanks for reading my novel and leaving a review, I really appreciate your support so I hope you will still do in the future :3

1yr