DonnEll
It is unfortunate written by someone with a third grade reading leven whi believes sonic the hedgehog is peak character design. Constantly smirking his way through every scene while the lack of punctuation makes it impossible to read comfortably. The story is also incredibly generic with not an interesting hook in sight. TLDR it is a less interesting and more poorly written Re:monster.
Honestly this is one of my top 5 books. I recommend it to anyone who wants a good story that doesnโ have all the cliches that are on this app. It does have some, but not all. The protagonist is amazing trying to realize what he is and the world building is amazing. I can also say this is a kingdom building novel as well but that is almost a spoiler.
Who is the strongest in the story Bryan or souta ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Will the Mc have multiple wife's/lovers? All the mortals asked from God was enjoyment and for the world to be fair. But God didn't listen. He had given up on his creations. They were filled with sin and ungratefulness. Once mortals didn't get answers from god they started playing god themselves. They started creating things without gods permission. But they were mortals not god so something had to suffer from all the mortals failed attempts at being god. Of course the selfish mortals made sure that it wasn't them that had to suffer. Yet what suffered was the world and it's their home. Without it they won't be able to live. The ever so foolish mortals instead of trying to fix what they have done instead tries to escape from their dying world. And they plan to to do it until they have escaped all of gods influence and can create their own false paradise that will be filled with false promises of a better future.
Very Fantastic Novel!! Why? First of all this LN is Slow development in story which very interesting.. Author purposely leave some question in early story like; 1. Who is MC? 2. Why he is reincarnated in game? 3. Who he's grandpa? 4. Is he's grandpa from Emperium? Like that.. The Grammar has some mistake in early chapters but greatly improve after 120 i would say.. In this story MC is not only the OP character because there's several OP characters and their backstory.. so in this LN there's no manhua Cliche where MC leave his companions after become too strong.. this is one reason why i like this LN.. Mc clearly smart, baddass, monster(ofc), rely on his companions, mastermind and ofc not pure anymore (doing seggs) ... For romance i would say, still pretty long but several female characters has show their feelings for MC (which we can see it as we read their behaviour).. Emm thats all i think? And sorry for my bad english..๐ค
Just thought it was time to write review since its have always been my favorite webnovel in this app I absolutely recommend reading this one everything is near perfection world building,character development are top tier,story is not too fast or too slow its just perfect ๐ only flaw I can think of is grammar but you won't regret reading this novel so go read now if you still hesitating (first time writing review since I never bothered to do so... sorry if I aint any help xD)
The beginning was promising and actually interesting. The mc then starts mentally regressing? Basically, he is like a child acting edgy. He is awkward about most of the story, because of comedy. Haha, he smiling creepily and thinking out loud (including the system and that this is a game) all day long, very funny. If you come here for the sake of reading a story about a non-human goblin character, I am sorry to break it to you, he evolves into a human-like creature and joins an academy. They can't even sense that he is a monster.
it's a decent story with decent character growth, expanding world, fairly put together all around good. Having said that it does need some TLC on at least what I have read thus far. If the writer isn't well versed in English or if it's a translation issue than a good chunk I could understand. I couldn't get into the book as a whole bc I kept having to adjust sentences and paragraphs to understand what was going on. It may get better as it goes along I hope so but for now I'm taking a break from it
Good novel, it has interesting characters, a good world building and the progression is also in a nice tempo. The writing quality is bad, some times words are missing and often past/present are mixed up. But the worst part is that the author dont know his own novel and character stats. He randomly increases or decreases stats/attr.! Sometimes he ignores the progress from the mc as it never happened, it is kinda frustrating. I hope you see this author so you can fix this for the future readers. Thx for the novel.
to keep it simple its a 3/5 average but on the better side. Is it worth it ? Meh good things : the world background aint bad ,nothing original but still good . There is some creativity in there. Especially with evolutions in my eyes. Thats it. The grammar and writing is horendously bad at some parts and passable at others,exposition is way too much and extremely repetitive ,there are only at most 5 characters that are not caricatures that could be exchanged with anyone else without the story changing in any way . The strategy parts are stupid ,the mc and some people are presented as smart ,yet they only do entry level scheming or planning that only stupid people wouldnt guess. FIGHTS ARE SO UNNECESSARILY DRAGGED OUT its a chore to read through and lastly plot armor is thiccc(3c thick)with this one .