Review Detail of Matt_Page in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

it's a decent story with decent character growth, expanding world, fairly put together all around good. Having said that it does need some TLC on at least what I have read thus far. If the writer isn't well versed in English or if it's a translation issue than a good chunk I could understand. I couldn't get into the book as a whole bc I kept having to adjust sentences and paragraphs to understand what was going on. It may get better as it goes along I hope so but for now I'm taking a break from it