Review Detail of PaNick_BUTTon in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

to keep it simple its a 3/5 average but on the better side. Is it worth it ? Meh good things : the world background aint bad ,nothing original but still good . There is some creativity in there. Especially with evolutions in my eyes. Thats it. The grammar and writing is horendously bad at some parts and passable at others,exposition is way too much and extremely repetitive ,there are only at most 5 characters that are not caricatures that could be exchanged with anyone else without the story changing in any way . The strategy parts are stupid ,the mc and some people are presented as smart ,yet they only do entry level scheming or planning that only stupid people wouldnt guess. FIGHTS ARE SO UNNECESSARILY DRAGGED OUT its a chore to read through and lastly plot armor is thiccc(3c thick)with this one .