alienfrommars
Honestly, I don't know what to say. For one, i definitely love the story. The writer is amazing. Just like my fave Nora Roberts. Samael, Lilou, Yul, Silvi, Klaus, Favian, Tilly... all of them has their own good and bad side. I even cried when Alfonse died even though he's one of the villain. I just finished Chapter 652. And boy, how I wished I did stop at 650. I might hate the author if Lilou and Stefan got together instead of Samael. But who knows... anyway. Out of all the storied Ive read, I can honestly say that if I have tons of money. I will pay this author, so that all that she will do is create more wonderful stories like this one. ❤️📖
Aye ayeee this is a great read! Def recommend! :D And lemme tell you why hoho: First, the writing quality is amazing! Little to no error, and pretty unnoticeable in my opinion lol, but oh well I'm not an expert at English so I can't really say much :'D And and and! Me really like that this story is being told in first person! :D If I'm not mistaken, I saw in your comment reply that the draft was in third person? Well, I'm glad it's in first person hehe! Makes me empathize much much more for the MC! And reading her thoughts and monologues was fun huehuehuehue <3 ALSOOOOO I SIMP FOR THE ML KYAAAA Can't stop smiling when I read their scene HEHEHEHEH The next good thing about this book is that there's no info dumps so far! :3 I like that the world's background, characters, and mysteries are slowly unfolded :3 Great workkkk authorrrr! <3
Had to work hard to pick this one apart! Overall, excellent on every level! The Good: From the setting to the characters to the events, the author does an amazing job of drawing the reader in! The amount of story and details are mixed perfectly so that one is not overwhelmed with lore or plot dumps. The Bad: REALLY had to stretch on this one as it does not have anything glaringly wrong with it. If I had to pick something... The style is a little too rigid and too formal. Not a bad thing really, but I personally find it harder to read a novel that is 'too correct'. Other than that, just the occasional typo that everyone does, nothing major. The Neutral: As I said, I really had to work to even find anything bad about this. My only suggestion would be to relax... and stop trying to use semicolons in every other paragraph. I think you will be fine though because I feel like you do relax a little from the first chapter to the last. I only have 4 chapters to read as of this review, but I can say I read everything you have published!
While reading the book, The first word that came to my mind is incredible. The entry scene of the main characters is epic and the story developed very well throughout the chapters. I'm curious to know what happens next. The writing style and dialogues are well written. added to my library. Excellent work, Author!
This is story is amazing and thrilling! I loved under the oak tree, but this story surpassed it. I had other books I was reading here but am now unable to finish it because it does not meet the standards that this author achieved. I love Lilou’s and Sam’s character development. So many twists and turns but always the love for each other, their family and people is there. I wished I could own a paper copy. Author please make it happen and release more art on Instagram. I want a prettier picture of Lilou maybe the picture Sam created of how he saw her!
OMG. This book is so beautifully, intricately, expertly (I have no words to describe it) written. The writing quality is the best I've seen on here, and I love the way each chapter ends (very full-circle ish). Not only that, but the author seems to know exactly which things to give more detail to and which less detail to make this story such a treat to follow. The plot seems very interesting so far, and the ML is quite the playful one (not sure what to think of him yet LOL He is a bit eccentric.) GIVE THIS NOVEL A GO
If you want something beautiful, bold, tantalizing, powerful, yet sweet, this is the book for you! The writing is wonderful, the character development is excellent and the imagery is breathtaking! Get ready for the ride of a lifetime, with amazing surprises at every turn! Kazzen is an amazing author! I recommend you do yourself a solid and devour everything she writes.