Aye ayeee this is a great read! Def recommend! :D And lemme tell you why hoho: First, the writing quality is amazing! Little to no error, and pretty unnoticeable in my opinion lol, but oh well I'm not an expert at English so I can't really say much :'D And and and! Me really like that this story is being told in first person! :D If I'm not mistaken, I saw in your comment reply that the draft was in third person? Well, I'm glad it's in first person hehe! Makes me empathize much much more for the MC! And reading her thoughts and monologues was fun huehuehuehue <3 ALSOOOOO I SIMP FOR THE ML KYAAAA Can't stop smiling when I read their scene HEHEHEHEH The next good thing about this book is that there's no info dumps so far! :3 I like that the world's background, characters, and mysteries are slowly unfolded :3 Great workkkk authorrrr! <3
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