ReincarnatedSaint
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Ok im gunna be honest i havnt even read a word from this book yet but from the um description or what i see this man wanna kill himself at first i found that funny ok i mean i dont find it funny he wants to kill himself its just the WILL HE KILL HIMSELF well if he died first episode and that was the end of him then gg story end or hes just not the mc anyway ree
In my personal opinion, there's too many POV switches, if we were just gonna stay with the mc and just switch occasionally like every 10 chapters, then it would have been fine. But if might be better to just stay in third person, there's also some spelling mistakes few miss placed names but it's fine. I'm only on chapter 20 so far but most of the characters seem a little"flat" like you need to build them up more, the personalities feel stereotypical.
GOOD STORY DESTROYED BY BAD WRITING QUALITY Clearly, this could've been a 4.7 or something but the author isn't experienced enough. Flaws: 1. POV crap - that thing just sucks. Remove it 2. Typical nooob mistake - All Allies are crap, All enemies are irrationally strong. -His parents are dumb and doesn't care about him. His male classmates are all dickheads wanting to crawl upon lisa and elly. His headmaster is a usepess piece of crap who only monitors the school, no thinking and moving needed, piece of ****. His enemies only need some sketchy pill to directly boost their powers and this is clearly laziness kicking in. Author could've made a more rational approach but NO he is so lazy
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