please update faster. love the plot. one of the best hp fanfic i read recently.

i like the writing quality of the author but the story felt so forced. conveniently when the straw hats approch enel he stops using observation haki, causes a series of misunderstandings. it was frustrating to read.

awesome story hope others will also read and award it. I really appreciate the author writing a fanfic on arefureta. it has good story development and character design.

story was fine until the mech tournament then you just needed him and sent him to another star cluster to meet the princess. well at least the writing and story development was good.

The MC is an idiot. He's stupid and has no guts. Always waiting for something good to happen. Can't he atleast save his friend at the cafeteria. He's always scared to do anything. Doesn't even check with the system how to upgrade his FP. Came to college yet doesn't even practice his blacksmithing. He can't improve himself how will he save the world. For me the story setting world development everything was good but the mc. Misunderstands his parents just because they didn't talk for 1 day. Luckily he heard them talking otherwise he never would have understood his parents. Hopefully in future chapters he builds up his character.