Review Detail of I_Sleep_Late in The Ancient Genes

GOOD STORY DESTROYED BY BAD WRITING QUALITY Clearly, this could've been a 4.7 or something but the author isn't experienced enough. Flaws: 1. POV crap - that thing just sucks. Remove it 2. Typical nooob mistake - All Allies are crap, All enemies are irrationally strong. -His parents are dumb and doesn't care about him. His male classmates are all dickheads wanting to crawl upon lisa and elly. His headmaster is a usepess piece of crap who only monitors the school, no thinking and moving needed, piece of ****. His enemies only need some sketchy pill to directly boost their powers and this is clearly laziness kicking in. Author could've made a more rational approach but NO he is so lazy