Reviews of The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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Author's Shameless 5 Star Review. A few points about the story - A reborn Gamer in the Naruto world. - No Harem. No pairings decided. - I'll try to stay as authentic to the Naruto world as possible. Meaning no Haki or Nen or Ki. -But I might give him mana in a very limited capacity. - Updates 3 times a week but that could increase.
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one of the best Naruto fic as well as air fic too. here Mc isn't op as heck, but he is much stronger than his age group, so no op Mc when he is a child. the Grammer is very good,like perfect and that's very rare to find on web novel, the update stability is also good, and the personality of Mc is that of a calm and cautious person. he isn't getting arrogant just because he is stronger than people of his age and is still cautious of others overall this fic is one of the best on web novel.
I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!
First of all id like to say that this is one of the best-written Naruto fanfictions I've read. It doesn't suddenly turn into some harem ecchi novel and it focuses on the power methods (mostly) in the naruto world. Why did it end up with a 3.6 rating? Let me explain and if the author is reading then I hope this review helps. Writing quality (4*): The writing quality is ok with no bad spag (spelling, punctuation, and grammar) and you can see it get better as the story progresses. You can definitely see the author's improvements. I gave it 4* though since the writing quality isn't anything mind-blowing but still flows nicely and is very readable. Story development (3*): Ok so the start of the story was very cliche and I feel sets a rather bland tone for the story. He is some rich unmotivated kid with no real friends in school, gets stage 3 cancer and runs out of the hospital, sees a cat and while crossing the road is involved in a car accident. He then gets adopted by a powerful old ninja who helps him to train to become stronger because he has been told to do so by a mysterious individual. Now there isn't anything bad per se with this setup but isn't anything groundbreaking either. Not to mention making the audience feel not super engaged with the story. Later on, he is thrust into interacting with the Hokage and some other heavy hitters while still in the academy, and once he finally graduates he is so far ahead of the main cast it's pretty laughable. He also is a rather righteous person which was a bit of a letdown since I do enjoy a more neutral leaning Mc. The fact he is in the shinobi world makes that even more odd since the story is a lot darker than you realize at first. With genocides, war constantly occurring and the leaf village being just as bad even with the preaching of peace I would have expected him to at least be less naive. Still, he does get fairly strong, and although I don't agree with some of his choices like with the Uchiha massacre and the way he was dragged into that plot his reactions and actions do fit into how he has been portrayed so far. A few ideas that could help could be getting the 3 tails that is in the lake if he hasn't been grabbed by the Akatsuki already, the peacock method could be explored, giving him other summons to learn from, learn or explore how hydrificaton works and if he can use other elements, even turn into a mist (plus with poison, he could become a poison mist or even make poison mist clones). So the story is a 3* in my opinion, definitely could be better and I can only hope he can he doesn't become some Saint or savior of everyone and everything in need. Character design (3*): the characters do fit their canon designs and their interactions do flow nicely and fit. However, the reason it's a 3* is because of the two main Oc Kensei and Daichi. Kensei is the old man who adopted Daichi and while he is ok doesn't really have too much depth to him and is there mainly to kind of help shield him from the big players a little and to give Daichi a mentor figure who trains him. He does what he is supposed to though so no real complaints. Daichi is a pretty typical mc. Nothing really special which is why I wasn't too surprised or disappointed with his good leaning. Would have been way more interesting if he was just fully selfish and thought about himself. Still, I am happy with the no romance (which I hope stays that way) and the confirmation of no harem. Update stability (5*): updates are very regular which is nice, especially for when you want to wait for a little and binge all the new chapters at once. World background (3*): it's just the naruto world which isn't too exciting but the methods of training the elements are very interesting. Hope things can continue in that vein.
At chapter 200. Fic is okay, very vanilla slice of life. Like author can’t come up with anything interesting to write about. MC doing mediocre things for a gamer and nothing new worth while happens. Gamer ability very nerf. cant waste my time reading this anymore. At chapter 200 nothing exciting yet is too slow pace.
Bro the mC is way too good im completly shocked with the way the author easily slides the mc through difficult situations. Also why not convert it into an animated series with permission from tokyo tv cause this will end naruto’s TRP and watcher count. Good Luck with the Story. Pls do supporrt this story it DESERVES IT!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Read the entire story up to the lastest chapter as of the 26/12/2022. This story is perhaps, one of the most solid Naruto fic's I've ever had the pleasure to read, without going into spoilers the power progression is very smooth and logical, the author is knowledgable on the source material even some 'minor' and easily forgotten pieces of 'trivia' around the Narutoverse can be found here and they are also open to other's informing them about said trivia or details that they might have missed or had a bit wrong. The characters themselves all feel like genuine people, the dialogue is again smooth and the way they act again 'feels' as if they actually belong to the world. The updates have been stable for as long as I have been reading this story -at least a month and a half now- with no hiatus or break. The quality of writting is also incredibly impressive not only by the standards of fic's but just in general and this helps with both the story development and world background tremendously which both are great on their own. Recommend that anyone with an interest in Naruto at least take a look.
Best Naruto-Gamer fanfic I read til now.(i have read dozens). Currently at Ch 119. Even though story is a little slow paced (author keeps apologizing for it), it is NOT even tiny bit Boring. Really loved how the interactions between characters going... Gamer interface is perfect and neat. (In most gamer fics, it usually kind of gets out of control as the story progresses...and become weird).
It was very intresting read i have to say. Pros: -balanced system (mc has to train a lot to get stronger) -dynamic and well written fights -progression is just great to read -worldbuilding and story Cons: -a lot of info dumps (a lot of nonsense %, a lot of nonsense skills, a lot of nonsense stats) - too little action for my liking (dungeons were fine but outside of it theres nothing) -author trying everything to make emotional attachments for mc which is tyring
Any fanfic of Naruto & Harry Potter where the insert MC lets the physical, emotional, and mental abuse of Naruto & Harry continue even though they can help just to maintain the plot or some BS reason that this abuse is integral to their development as a person is an immediate negative for me. They are CHILDREN. You wouldn't want your self in that position, much less a child. Its another issue if the MC cant help with Uchiha massacre, thats too much for a child or a single person to change, that I understand. But to not do something, to not help a child suffering from abuse every single day even though you can help and do something is just disgustingly selfish. They don't need to be a saviour but at least help. At least be a friend that they can talk to and confide. Anyway, aside from this, this a good story with potential. I would just like to comment that it shows too much stats. I've read so many fanfic like this and they all became increasingly repetitive and boring. It becomes a pain for both author and readers. Just limit showing it. Just my two cents. Hope this story continues to progress. Good luck Author-san. More power to you.
