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Any fanfic of Naruto & Harry Potter where the insert MC lets the physical, emotional, and mental abuse of Naruto & Harry continue even though they can help just to maintain the plot or some BS reason that this abuse is integral to their development as a person is an immediate negative for me. They are CHILDREN. You wouldn't want your self in that position, much less a child. Its another issue if the MC cant help with Uchiha massacre, thats too much for a child or a single person to change, that I understand. But to not do something, to not help a child suffering from abuse every single day even though you can help and do something is just disgustingly selfish. They don't need to be a saviour but at least help. At least be a friend that they can talk to and confide. Anyway, aside from this, this a good story with potential. I would just like to comment that it shows too much stats. I've read so many fanfic like this and they all became increasingly repetitive and boring. It becomes a pain for both author and readers. Just limit showing it. Just my two cents. Hope this story continues to progress. Good luck Author-san. More power to you.
The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
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Who said anybody should care? If you don't want to care and do nothing, good for you. I've read cold-blooded and self-centered MCs before like Warlock of the Magus World and I enjoyed them cause they are true to themselves and their selfishness. But don't say it's "integral to the story" to justify your lack of care or action to not look cold or selfish. Some people are built that way and its fine cause its their lives. But don't act like you did it for the "greater good" or with good intentions in mind. That's just hypocrisy and lazy writing from authors.
leonel551:not everybody cares enough to do something about it