Review Detail of ErozothDraeor in The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

Chapter 137. tldr: Discount system. I say if you want OP go big or go home, the author tries to balance it (with some plot manipulation) by hyping the MC then reminding us, constantly, he is not powerful as such and such and it generates is frustration It's basically a rehash of the canon story from another POV. Even the times author makes sure to remind with a chapter title "divergent from canon" it has little to no impact on the story (so far). It's a good read if you can ignore a lot of details. Writing quality 5 - No complaints at all. Updated 4 - Decent. Story 3 - It's 85% training montage. Some filler, some interaction. (A bit more interaction in latest chapters). Character 4 - Bland. The MC trains. He is not really smart, a lot of his decisions are based on results from quests (Do I tell other people something and risk this quest result, or not tell. Never considering this are people he trusts and keeping it from them is.... not a nice thing to do, its all about the quests). World 3 - Copied world. No explanation on places, no introduction. It is a lot of assumptions the readers know. If you don't have good details on Naruto, geography, history..... you will miss a lot. It's a discount system. There is a constant hype of the MC "talent", yet at the same time constant reminders how others are better (at the same age, Itachi), constant reminders how there are others more powerful (granted, they are older, but then he is not really powerful). A lot of missed opportunities, that many comments about, that are ignored to prevent the MC being too powerful. A lot of forced, yet subtle, nerfs (ie the reminders of "But that person is more powerful" then you find that person is low Jonin but the MC has double the chakra). The worse part, if you consider it, is the MC has an ability he got early in the novel to basically use telekinesis a kin to X-Men type, it clearly said he can perform atomic manipulation. This was kind of a dud in the story since the MC completely ignored it. If he trained that and aimed for stats for that no one could stop him.