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Review Detail of TheBlackKappa in The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

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TheBlackKappa
TheBlackKappaLv111yrTheBlackKappa

It was very intresting read i have to say. Pros: -balanced system (mc has to train a lot to get stronger) -dynamic and well written fights -progression is just great to read -worldbuilding and story Cons: -a lot of info dumps (a lot of nonsense %, a lot of nonsense skills, a lot of nonsense stats) - too little action for my liking (dungeons were fine but outside of it theres nothing) -author trying everything to make emotional attachments for mc which is tyring

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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

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MonkWithAPen
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Thank you for the Fair Review. Now for the cons, I'd say the info dump gets a lot less after chapter 50. It's my first gamer story so, the lot of skills description in the beginning chapters is my B.😅 and as for the lack of fights outside the dungeon, once Daichi becomes a genin he'll have plenty fights in the real world. And I made Kensei so that Daichi could have a semblance of connection. someone he can trust and rely on...

TheBlackKappa
TheBlackKappaLv11TheBlackKappa

Yes i could see that there were less info dumps later on, i prefer systems more like ai chips in the world where only mc has a system. I mean lvls of skills are enough, +10% accuracy etc. you use are just unnecessary. Skills that doesn't use any of chakra etc. like death blow that just give you straight +% are just rejecting to continue reading for me. Sp is rejecting too, thats my personal preferences. For personal attachments i meant plot with Reo, Yota's death who was random child he had seen couple of times and knew would die and he cried bcs of it, staying with rookie 9 in academy while he is jonin lvl. Instead of Daichi's journey i felt more like i read Daichi's training montage (btw love this feeling of progression) + rookie's 9 canon with random op dude.