It was very intresting read i have to say. Pros: -balanced system (mc has to train a lot to get stronger) -dynamic and well written fights -progression is just great to read -worldbuilding and story Cons: -a lot of info dumps (a lot of nonsense %, a lot of nonsense skills, a lot of nonsense stats) - too little action for my liking (dungeons were fine but outside of it theres nothing) -author trying everything to make emotional attachments for mc which is tyring
MonkWithAPen
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LIKEThank you for the Fair Review. Now for the cons, I'd say the info dump gets a lot less after chapter 50. It's my first gamer story so, the lot of skills description in the beginning chapters is my B.đ and as for the lack of fights outside the dungeon, once Daichi becomes a genin he'll have plenty fights in the real world. And I made Kensei so that Daichi could have a semblance of connection. someone he can trust and rely on...
Yes i could see that there were less info dumps later on, i prefer systems more like ai chips in the world where only mc has a system. I mean lvls of skills are enough, +10% accuracy etc. you use are just unnecessary. Skills that doesn't use any of chakra etc. like death blow that just give you straight +% are just rejecting to continue reading for me. Sp is rejecting too, thats my personal preferences. For personal attachments i meant plot with Reo, Yota's death who was random child he had seen couple of times and knew would die and he cried bcs of it, staying with rookie 9 in academy while he is jonin lvl. Instead of Daichi's journey i felt more like i read Daichi's training montage (btw love this feeling of progression) + rookie's 9 canon with random op dude.