Reviews of Tales of the Dragon Mortal
Tales of the Dragon Mortal
hartpeler
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This novel reminds me of a previous novel here in webnovel called "Three Gods" triplets that have shared mental connections and can evolve their power by eating beasts. Sadly it was dropped. So I am happy to see this
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Hello author! I must say i'm enjoying your story so far, and I'm reading this right now at 6am 𤣠I am smiling as I read the initial chapters of the story since Laira Village is just so damn perfect, i wish there's a place like that exists in real life đ. I like the twins' relationship with one another as well. Grammar indeed needs work but hey, I can still understand what you wanted to convey to the readers. So it's really no big deal. âşď¸ All in all, I really have a great reading experience and will keep reading your book. Keep up the good work! âşď¸
As a reader, my attention span was not that long. Also, I'm not knowledgeable when it comes to Fantasy. But I really find it entertaining to read. The good thing about this novel is that it provides context. Plus, it's easy to understand that made its range wider. It was direct and detailed. I just think that the consistency of the characters can be improved. but it is a MUST read fantasy.
I really look forward to this story's development. It has a lot of descriptions, and goes into a lot of detail, which always is fun. Sadly the story is very hard for me to read and understand, the sentence structure is too complicated. The commas, capitall letters and punctuasion marks need to be sorted out if I want to continue reading this story. I can tell there has been put a lot of effort in this story, which always is a huge plus for me.
I'm not one for giving bad reviews but man I can't follow this book your prologue along with your first few chapter lacks everything that is needed to capture an audience i was really trying to read it but it was putting me to sleep literally you need better attention grabbers and you have to explain about which character is which because I had know idea who was the main character cause you threw out so many names but no explanations about who they are ok I'm done ranting
Hi, author-nim. First of all, I could tell that your world-building will be fantastic. The descriptions are well-made especially the settings and how the novel's universe will look like. Great imagination you got there. There are minor mistakes in tenses and there was also a weird break of compound sentences but overall, it's fine and not bothersome to read. Keep up the good work, bruh, and I hope you get the contract soon. :)
