Review Detail of Viola_02 in Tales of the Dragon Mortal

I really look forward to this story's development. It has a lot of descriptions, and goes into a lot of detail, which always is fun. Sadly the story is very hard for me to read and understand, the sentence structure is too complicated. The commas, capitall letters and punctuasion marks need to be sorted out if I want to continue reading this story. I can tell there has been put a lot of effort in this story, which always is a huge plus for me.