Review Detail of AlishbaM in Tales of the Dragon Mortal

First of all, the synopsis is extremely good. So much that the rest of the chapter itself feels like a synopsis. I don't understand why you have made each sentence into a separate paragraph? Some of the sentences are getting longer than they're needed to be. Your plot is really good for a fantasy novel, but you should add more details. Other than this, this is the kind of book I actually look forward to reading. Good luck<333