Reviews of Super Necromancer System
Super Necromancer System
John_Doever
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Story overall is average, but in essence is just a twist on my vampire system. The writing is not bad, and it reads well. The characters are kind of hit or miss. you've got a vampiric death knight that is in love with the MC, but it's presented in a cringy manner. The MC is logical and mostly unemotional to the point there really isn't any character growth, in fact he sets off on a path to give up all his humanity. The MCs' companions are all reserected minions from monsters to fallen heroes. I've read to chapter 48, and I believe I won't be going any further. The story is fine for a light read, but personally I didn't find it engaging enough go any further. overall not my cup of tea, but for those looking for an offshoot of my vampire system or my great demon system you might like this book.
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This is one of those special novels which, I think, could and possibly will surpass My Vampire System. The story is good with decent world background. Although it is a bit confusing at first but the with time (after 12 chapters) you will get acquainted. Actually I thought this would be another fan fic of some anime, well because the author has taken a lot of inspiration from different media i.e., My Hero Academia, One Punch Man, The Boys, My Vampire System and Cyberpunk. But to my surprise the Author managed to create individuality of the world through introduction of System. I congratulate the Author for creating such a masterpiece. I hope you get successful in life.
For new readers, read at your own risk, the story is likely dropped. Overall, I’m loving this story. Some minor typos, a couple things he retroactively changed, but overall, it’s pretty dang good. …but the fact remains that the author is getting notorious for his bad habits about dropping stories without a word. This one, sadly, looks it may have met that fate. And right when the stakes are higher than ever. There’s still a lot to enjoy here, but… don’t expect a conclusion. And remember the name of this author, so that you know he might pull this at any time, with any other stories he may write.
It's a refreshing novel, however it sadly falls in the same categories as most trash xian xia novels, in some ways at least. Though I still like it. So why did I give it such a mediocre rating? As probably all readers here, I have read my fair share of CN, JP and KR novels. Sadly due to that you can see where some of the ideas have been taken from. MC and Valera almost the same as Overlords Momonga/Ainz and Albedo. Valera and Albedo even have the same intention, being a heavy armored defensive type. Though Valera has her Berserk. The sheer amount of Popcolture copies is staggering. Boku no Hero Academia, DC and Marvel and most obviously Cyberpunk to the point that almost the entire teminology is the exact same, including the things they represent. E.g. nomads are nomads, netrunners are netrunners and so many other things, even down to the dates. But most obnoxious is the MC character vs MC character when fighting on his own. He is always careful, planning ahead and if possible doesn't give his enemies any chance for counterplay. But when fighting it all goes out the window. But then again this happens when you copy trash xian xia tropes like needlessly long battles just to pad word count. This goes against the MC and is unimmersive. If MC is the cautious type, he would never take a slow approach and probe an enemy he wants to kill in that same fight. Going all out is the best way, as you don't give the enemy time to probe your strength etc. If he wanted to gain information and such and not kill, then yes otherwise no. Tldr I feel like I am reading a Cyberpunk fan fiction. Couple with all those "borrowed" ideas, I always feel it's borderline illegal. Don't get me wrong I will read it. It's refreshing and I like the mash up. But what if it get's a copy right strike? Then I will never know the ending and it is frustrating thinking about it.
This novel is a jewel amongst all other system-related novel. The world-building and character development is very well structured. This is one of the novel that keeps me scrolling for more and I really am impressed about the quality of the writing of this author. I am heavily invested in this piece of artwork and I am eager to uncover everything about the story and exciting adventures the MC trudges through. Well recommended to other story-readers out there.
Honestly a great book, started off good and steady. Feel like he could’ve kept a certain two characters, but I respect the choice, hopefully mc is able to reproduce. But overall great novel nice and steady space. Mc that actually tries to use his skull. Although a lot of short lived battles to get mc stronger, he goes into politics and other things to build his forces up which is nice to see, love that it’ not alwayss war and he can flex his brain skull power. Would recommend no harem so yeah lovely.
Superman vs Necromancer, now thats something that has never been done before! Enter Earth 117 years after superheros super villains and monsters started roaming it. Our powerless mc joins a cliche powerless people are useless school for the psychotic, where some of the local imates (school kids) do their usual role. in steps our mc with his favorite necromancer system and a edgy new look, his goal? Vengence. He is positioned to take advantage of no one being familliar with whats going on with him, his magic spells and doom stack of undead. Cant wait to see how he fairs agaisnt a flying indestructible laser equiped human missle, that deals both fire and bludgeoning damage (which hes weak to).
I really like how this book is going it seems like it’s only going to get better. I’ve always loved necromancer books especially the ones that have systems .I hope the author keeps going with this because it has a lot of potential and there aren’t too many necromancy stories out there to read and I like this one so keep it up and good luck I’ll be supporting your story.
I'm in love with this story. This story offers a fresh take on the necromancer genre while adapting all of the features that make the character class amazing. So far, each character is unique and well defined. The author is also very skilled in world building and continuity. overall, I'd suggest this story to anyone willing to listen, but I wish there were updates.
Super Necromancer System is based on an interesting concept with well thought out worldbuilding and good writing.The problem here is the author himself, who seems to possess an inability to stick to a story until he completes it. He has done this for other stories, which you can see by looking on his page, and this seems to extend to Super Necromancer System, as he has not updated it in four months, which is greatly disappointing as I quite liked reading this. I hope that I am wrong and he is just taking a long break to prepare for the future volumes, but I will not get my hopes up. Overall it's worth reading for what is there but if you are the kind who must see things conclude then this is not for you.
Great Book, this is a really great book the MC is great and OP, he's not some OP MC that is a big hypocrite or has some weird condition that makes him bleed from his nose from seeing a naked girl. No, He a good MC instead. The info about the world, the story development, the interesting powers, the possibilities for what this book could become is much bigger than a few worlds, he could become the Ruler of entire universe's. It's pretty updated regularly & is all around a good book. 9/10 Recommend
The concept is 10/10. Think 'The Boys' in a cyberpunk setting and the MC has powers and summons that are based on magic and fantasy. That might sound like a lot but the author actually found a way to make it work. MC is cool in the fact that he's ruthless, cunning and doesn't even fall to the generic trap of exposing his powers to the world before he's ready to fight back. Unlike a lot of these system type novels where MC will help someone, thus exposing himself and having enemies target him early(generic stuff like that). On the other hand, he's far too edgy for my liking. . . He both literally and figuratively turns himself into more of a monster the longer the story goes on. The idea that all he cares about is power is cool but the fact that he's a decent person overall really makes you question his whole willingness to turn himself more and more to a monster(just feels unnecessary to me, I'm totally fine with him just being a ruthless person. Would make a lot more sense) Then there's the pacing. This is probably the worst part of this novel by far. . . It's so incredibly slow. Events that you feel should take 2 chapters take like 5 with multiple repeats of the same information and over descriptions of things and appearances. In any other novel this would actually be a deal breaker imo, but like I said because the concept is so cool to over amount of exposition is bearable. But yeah, by the time you get to chapter 150 you feel like we could have gotten here at chapters 100-120.
