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TheWitcher5dCommented'That's impressive!' She went over the names of the two applicants and smiled. 'So the girl is Lux, and the man is… Jet.'- TheWitcher16dCommentedIt was a place brighter than daylight, despite there being no sun in sight. Clouds replaced solid ground, and the horizon seemed to stretch on endlessly.
- TheWitcher2mthCommentedArthur's breaths came in desperate gasps, as though each one might be his last. He gazed down at the deep gash in his stomach, where his internal organs peeked through. A Cerberus, a monstrous hound-like creature, had inflicted the wound upon him. Dizziness overwhelmed him as his lifeblood seeped away.
- TheWitcher2mthCommented
Did the golden haired guy managed to survive or what? How come the captain still has the crystal?
Khan's eyes widened seeing the gigantic paw that was closing in on him, the wind already tearing apart his cloth and creating deep cuts on his skin, but before it could land on him, he rolled himself into a ball as he placed the crystal at the front of his head. - TheWitcher3mthCommented
Pronoun needs changing here.
Lyrian too stood there, perplexed, her eyes fixed on their base camp, which was now completely trashed and destroyed. Torn tents lay scattered, some even burnt, with remnants of their campfire strewn across the ground. - TheWitcher3mthCommented
This grammar gave me a seizure
This was Leon. His eyes were white, although they had rolled back into his head, but his sword was also already out, causing them to go white anyways. - TheWitcher3mthCommented
😂
Just at that split moment, as everyone looked around with their eyes wide open, their guards up for anything that might attack, a giant tiger the size of an elephant jumped out of the thick bushes. - TheWitcher3mthPosted
What I liked about this novel is the quality of its writing, such generous vocabulary making the read enjoyable and enticing. The story development is exciting and provides lots of anticipation. Likewise, the world background is very well described and there is clear picture about how the apocalypse ended that way. The only thing I am mostly off about are the characters and their personalities. I apologize but I am not a fan of immature characters. I completely lost it after the introduction of the Oracle lady and her interactions with the protagonist and his allies. Some of the characters such as Colin has a tendency to be immature but maybe that just how the writer wants him to be. I would love to further my reading as I really love how the author does a very articulate novel but I suppose my taste for this type of novel is washout. This is just my sincere opinion and I hope other readers will find it different from me. All the best!
- TheWitcher3mthCommentedCh 74 Feast (4)
- TheWitcher3mthCommentedCh 63 Rewards (3)
- TheWitcher7mthCommentedCh 1144 Theater of Shadows
- TheWitcher7mthCommented
of my smoothie
'Now, for the finishing touch…' - TheWitcher7mthCommented
The start of his Villain Arc?
And then, not too far away, he had found the body of Master Jet, as well. - TheWitcher9mthCommentedCh 1 The Mysterious Countdown
- TheWitcher9mthCommentedCh 1000 The Fall of Falcon Scott (18)
- TheWitcher9mthCommented
A milestone worth celebrating 🥂
The Fall of Falcon Scott (18) - TheWitcher9mthCommentedCh 994 The Fall of Falcon Scott (12)
- TheWitcher9mthCommentedCh 992 The Fall of Falcon Scott (10)
- TheWitcher9mthCommented
Good comeback 😂
"How should I know? Sure, it is going to hold… until it doesn't."