Reviews of Subordination system

another master piece, the only thing I can say is that chapter are short, but I cannot complaint this is too good!

I've read through this twice the early chaps have some small mistakes however it gets better as you go the fact this is the authors first story is understandable nothing is perfect Jason is a good guy and tries his best if or when the author continues this is the day I continue to read.

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Many mistakes in the statuses of characters, inconsistencies regarding even their names, but....I like the story . Wish though there was an ending to it...but seems it's an abandoned work! Too bad....😔

As someone who reads quite a lot, I just wanted to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed the story. This is the first story I’ve read in a while the has really drawn me in and made me want to keep reading. It’s not perfect, by any means, but it’s nailed what I consider to be the most important part of any story, which is successfully drawing me in and making them want more. And more than that, I really like 3 main characters. If I had to point out anything though, I would question as to why the swear words are all censored? It hasn’t affected my enjoyment, but does seem odd to me.

I am giving this an overall 2.6 because your quality of writing needs work, you have so many mistakes in every chapter. Your story development is a 3 out of 5 because the story is decent. The characters are great but still 4 out of 5. and the other 2 i rated 2 out of 5. You might not like hearing this but to make this novel better you need to go back to the beginning and fix all your mistakes. The character level keeps jumping around. He gains levels, but then he somehow loses levels. You are the second most inconsistent author i met. I do like your story though so even with all your faults i am continuing on.

reason is this novel story way so slow so slow that it will make you fell like you are a turtle .... way so slow if you don't like slow very slow type novel then its not for you ... don't think about it because it has 300 chapter means it has a lot plot... the truth is it 10 day story takes 160 chapter that will make you crazy....😑

Like the story’s main plot so far but have a lot of character holes that need to be ironed out. There are grammatical errors that need to be corrected so worse than others. Punctuations arent used properly at times either. MC does some contradicting things at times but that is ok as people do that in real life. Hope it gets edited before you charge people but good luck.

Great novel with great potential but I have a few concerns with it the character development is good but only for the MC but side characters are not given enough light the world development is very awful and I really don't know what is going on especially with the game world since we have nothing to go on except the MC view the author has Great potential but is limited by some of these factors but he also has some strong points like his hilarious language Note to chap 103

I can’t read this, the grammar makes it feel like a kid wrote the story. How hard can it be to capitalize letters? Unnecessary exclamation marks etc

The story development is too random and vrmmo game structure is giant a*s plothole. No character development what so ever. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎